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gravity's evolution by *Formor:iconFormor:

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When she stopped breathing
My world fell silent
A thousand years of emptiness
Stretched out before me within one ray of sunshine
Even Orpheus’ sweet tunes
Could not summon me back into the light
Orion’s Belt in the winter sky held no magic for me anymore
The calm evening winds
Through my hands I could no longer feel
The orchids bloomed
And fell to the dirt
I no longer had the strength to pick them up
I crawled inside my shadow
But the numbers were not right
I watched the air
Turn dense around me
My reflection’s reflection
Turning into a waxen shell
The bar of stars
In the pinwheel kept turning
All roads led me to the hollow center
The darkness fell into me
Where nothing exists
The pinwheel turned with me
That the dust would be my home
Gravity’s evolution released me
©2007-2009 *Formor
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I got the inspiration to write this after reading Wittgenstein this foggy morning.



(c) aw 07
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*EddieTheYeti:iconEddieTheYeti: Dec 19, 2007, 6:52:27 AM
That is Fabulous Bro! I do not read much poetery here on dA but this one is WOW!!! :clap: :clap:

Is it about your Mom? VERY Moving!!!

:manhug:

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See enough horror and experience enough pain and you become separated from your self.

- ETY


An artist must create as often as possible. To cease this task is, to the soul of an artist, as ceasing to breathe.

- ETY
*Formor:iconFormor: Dec 19, 2007, 6:53:48 AM
Thank you, bro :hug: I'm not sure what it exactly about ... it could be about my mom, I guess. I have been writting a lot more lately, like I used to ... I have really missed it. Thank you! :hug:
*EddieTheYeti:iconEddieTheYeti: Dec 19, 2007, 6:54:24 AM
No need to Thank...It was Great. I can REALLY relate to the sentiment! :hug:

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See enough horror and experience enough pain and you become separated from your self.

- ETY


An artist must create as often as possible. To cease this task is, to the soul of an artist, as ceasing to breathe.

- ETY
*Wildfire2003:iconWildfire2003: Dec 19, 2007, 7:33:30 AM
This is so beautiful and haunting:clap: More please:please:

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Live as you breathe, free.
Sticks and stones may break some bones but words cause permanent damage.
If they are bad mouthing me behind my back, you better believe they are bad mouthing you behind yours too.
*Formor:iconFormor: Dec 19, 2007, 7:44:28 AM
I have written a lot lately ... I need to fix them up a little, though, thank you :hug:
*Wildfire2003:iconWildfire2003: Dec 19, 2007, 7:50:05 AM
Welcome, and I look forward to reading more:heart:

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Live as you breathe, free.
Sticks and stones may break some bones but words cause permanent damage.
If they are bad mouthing me behind my back, you better believe they are bad mouthing you behind yours too.
*aseariel:iconaseariel: Dec 19, 2007, 10:39:11 AM
oh ,wow :O
quite powerful.

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πάντα δέ δοκιμάζετε, τò καλòν κατέχετε
but test all [things], hold fast to the good
~kikitty:iconkikitty: Dec 19, 2007, 1:02:25 PM
I like it. I haven't seen any work from you here in a while...
*Formor:iconFormor: Dec 19, 2007, 2:50:02 PM
Thank you very much :)
*Formor:iconFormor: Dec 19, 2007, 2:50:20 PM
Thank you! I know. I have been busy with teaching and school.
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